Shot list:
Tilt shot of Harry Cooper in the alleyway and Will Block quietly in conversation.
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Close up of the hands of Harry and Will as the money is exchanged
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Long shot of Eve White walking away with bag on shoulder.
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Close up of Will nodding in agreement to Harry
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Close up of Harry, slight smirk on his face, putting a cigarette to his lips and the gloved hand of Scarlet Fraser lighting the cigarette
High Angle of Eve White arriving at the ATM machine just about to put her card in
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Close up of card going into the ATM machine
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Over the shoulder of Will looking at Eve White at the ATM machine
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Over the shoulder of Eve looking around her, suspicous that someone is watching her
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Medium shot of Eve walks away from the machine, putting card into her purse
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Close up of Eve's hand going into her bag to put her purse away, her passport seen in frame
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Close up of Wheels of Wills skateboard rolling down the road
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Medium shot of Eve's feet walking/running (Wills legs seen in background)
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Low angle of Eve running down the ramp towards the camera
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Long shot of Eve looking bewildered in subway. Silence.
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Over the shoulder of Will rolling down the ramp fast on the skateboard
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* Low angle shot of eve running slightly right to the camera and will catching up on the skateboard.
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* Low angle shot of eve running slightly right to the camera and will catching up on the skateboard.
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Medium/Long shot of Mugging of Eve, she falls to the ground
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Worms eye of Will riding off on the skateboard as from Eve White's point of view
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Long shot of Will riding down the street to Harry who is waiting for him hidden in the alleyway
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Medium shot of Will passing the stolen bag to Harry, who then passes the bag to Scarlet standing behind him.
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Low angle shot of Eve on the floor of the subway, distressed and getting to her feet
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Close up of Scarlet’s face as she’s leaving the alleyway with Eve’s bag on her shoulder. Camera pans out for medium shot as she’s walking to view the her whole body
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Over the shoulder shot/ long shot of Scarlet walking towards the place where Eve is. Eve turns to face the camera, close up of Eve’s face as she looks angry.
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An splendidly thought out shot list. The cliff hanger may need to be more dramatic without losing authenticity. Consider that Eve comes up on Scarlet or one of the boys in a confined space carrying a knife and thrusts it against his or her neck; or:
ReplyDeleteSkateboarder is blinded by car headlights; cut to Eve in car with another character; car appears to have knocked down skateeboarder...fade to black!!! This would leave the audience keen to see what happens next..
It is often wise to film two endings and get some feedback from other students to see which is the most effective.
Keep up the good work Jenna.
To add to my last comment, the alternative cliffhanger also adds dimension to Eve's character in that she's not prepared to be a passive victim!
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